22A Elevator Pitch No. 3

2) I didn't really change many of the things that I did from the last elevator pitch. I did cut back on my pitch, as it was too long the first time around but making it simpler brings the point of the pitch more clearly into focus. 
3)I tried to keep my voice from being monotone and made natural fluctuations while speaking. I also cut back on my pitch time because I realized that it was get lengthy when I had written it. 

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  1. Kelly GestMarch 31, 2019 at 8:26 AM

    Hi Jenna,

    I really enjoyed watching your elevator pitch! I thought that simplifying it and working on making it more straight to the point was very beneficial in your case! Definitely the change in your tone of voice helped to engage the audience and make it even more interesting to watch. Overall, great post!

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